题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Manager,
This is a letter of complaint concerned the actions of one of your online store.Last Sunday,October 29th,I buy a dress from a store on your website.But I was not satisfied with the dress when I received it,so I decided to return it.But the salesman refused my request in a rudely tone.I explained the reason that I wanted to return it,but he said he was busy and didn’t have time to deal it.Now he isn’t replying to us at a11.
I feel that the salesman was impolite.I hope that you can look into for the matter.I have bought lots of things on your website and I look forward to a much pleasurable shopping experience next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【解析】1.句意:这是一封投诉信,关于你的一个网店的行为。此处是现在分词做后置定语,故把concerned--- concerning。
2. one of后跟名词复数,故把store---stores。
3.根据Last Sunday,可知句子用一般过去时态,故把buy---bought。
4.句意:在你的网店里买了一套连衣裙。此处表示特指,故把a---the。
5.句意:用粗鲁的语调。形容词修饰名词,故把rudely--- rude。
6.句意:我解释我想归还它的理由。此处the reason做先行词,在后面的定语从句中做原因状语,故把that---why。
7.固定词组:deal with处理,故在deal后加with。
8.句意:现在他一点也没有回答我。根据上文可知把us---me。
9.句意:我希望你能调查这件事。固定词组:look into调查,故把for去掉。
10.句意:我期待下一次更愉快的购物体验。句子用比较级,故把much---more.