题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,与好朋友小明约好一起去博物馆,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Xiao Ming,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go to the museum with you as planned because my mother is coming to see me this Saturday morning. It is the first time that she has come here, and I’ll have to pick her up at the train station. I sincerely hope that the change will not cause you too much trouble.
I’m wondering whether you are free on Sunday afternoon. If it’s convenient to you, let’s meet at 2:30 p.m. outside the museum. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I will be available any time next weekend.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:此作文是常规的邮件作文,要求写一封道歉邮件,是应用文的一种。使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因;另约时间。注意使用连接词,使作文内容连贯。
【亮点说明】范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句和原因状语从句that I can’t go to the museum with you as planned because my mother is coming to see me this Saturday morning;It is the first time that she has come here,固定句式堪称巧妙;I’m wondering whether you are free on Sunday afternoon.句中whether引导宾语从句;条件句If it’s convenient for you;省略句If not等,长短句结合,使内容更加丰富。