Question

假设你是John, 你的笔友李华口语不好，他来信请你谈谈你的意见。你给他写一封回信。提出以下看法和建议：

1. 在课堂上要积极发言，多争取说英语的机会。如果说错，老师会帮助你纠正错误。

2. 在课内课外尽可能多地说英语，熟能生巧。

3. 找一个喜欢说英语的同学共同实践，相互帮助。

4. 不要失去信心，不要怕说错，不要怕别人讥笑。

5. 只要坚持下去，一定能提高英语口语水平。

注意：1. 词数：120-150.

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．信的开头界唯一为你写好。

Dear Li Hua,

Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

John

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English.

Here is some of my advice on improving your spoken English:

First of all, in class you must be active. Get every chance to speak. If you make any mistake, your teacher and your classmates will help you. Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. As you know, practice makes perfect.

Why not find someone with whom you can practise speaking English? Thus you can help each other.

Don’t lose heart in your spoken English, and don’t be afraid of making any mistake or being laughed at. As long as you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken English.

Yours sincerely,

John

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。