Question

【题目】假如你是李华，最近收到英国笔友Tom的来信。他想了解你校如何维护学生在校期间的安全。请你给他写一封英语回信，介绍你校的做法，如重视安全问题、加强安全教育、增加保安人员、来访登记等。

注意：1.信的内容可适当发挥；

2.词数120左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总数)。

3.参考词汇：安全意识awareness of safety；登记register；保安security guard

Dear Tom，

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

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We believe a safer school will provide a better learning environment for us students.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

So far，things have been done to protect the students in and out of our school. Our teachers often remind us of the importance of security. We have organized several theme school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety. We have been taught ways to protect ourselves from danger. For example，if we find something unusual，we should report it to the school guard immediately or we can call the school securityline. At the same time，stricter security measures have been taken by our school，including a requirement that all visitors should register before entering our school.Besides，a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school.

We believe a safer school will provide a better learning environment for us students.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】此文为提纲式作文，解题步骤如下：

第一步：审题，抓要点：要点主要有（1. 英国笔友Tom想了解你校如何维护学生在校期间的安全。2. 介绍你校的做法，如重视安全问题、加强安全教育、增加保安人员、来访登记等。）

第二步：定人称，定时态。人称：第一人称。时态：一般现在时。

第三步：分段落，列提纲。可分三段，第一段要点1，第二段要点2，第三段做出评价。

亮点分析：

高级词汇：

concern ， security，theme school meetings， strengthen ， awareness of safety， security line， measures ，requirement，environment

高级句型：

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

So far，things have been done to protect the students in and out of our school. We have organized several theme school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety. We have been taught ways to protect ourselves from danger. （不定式表目的）

At the same time，stricter security measures have been taken by our school，including a requirement that all visitors should register before entering our school. Besides，a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school. （被动语态）