Question

你的朋友王林刚转学去了一所新学校，学校的各个学生社团(associations)正在纳新。面对众多的选择，王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。

注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。

Dear Wang Lin,

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Yours sincerely

Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,

In your letter, you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your new school. Thanks for trusting me and I’ll try to make some suggestions.

I feel that it would be wise if you could join in the Basketball Association since you love it so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Besides, the English Club is also a wonderful choice. Apart from improving your English study, their activities are helpful in many aspects. For instance, your skills of communication will turn out to be better than before. By the way, maybe it is a good chance to make friends with English native speakers.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. If you have any more problems, please contact me at any time. I’m willing to discuss with you whenever you need.

Yours sincerely,

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：该作文要求写一封信，属于应用文的范畴。其中信件的基本格式已经给出。文章主题注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】 正文第一段写明回信的主题，以及寒暄。第一句使用了宾语从句you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your new school你想我征求在你新学校选择社团的意见。正文第二段第一句用了多个从句嵌套。I feel that it would be wise if you could join in the Basketball Association since you love it so much. 我感觉如果你加入篮球部应该是明智的，因为你很喜欢篮球。第一个that引导了宾语从句做feel的宾语，if引导的的条件状语从句，since又引导了一个原因状语从句。第二句使用了not only …but also结构，句子要倒装。这里开始陈述去篮球部的原因：Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. 它不仅能满足你的兴趣爱好、让你从繁重的学业中放松，它也能促进你与你的新伙伴之间的友谊。第三句开始介绍英语社团使用了连词beside表示转折。第四句开始说明英语社团的好处 Apart from improving your English study…除了能提高你的英语成绩…第四句开始具体展开英语社团的好处。正文第三段结尾表达祝福，使用了一个if引导的状语从句。If you have any more problems, please contact me at any time. 如果还有什么问题，随时联系我。Whenever引导的让步状语从句I’m willing to discuss with you whenever you need。无论何时你需要的时候我都很乐意与你讨论。本文用了大量的从句以及各种复杂句，还使用了不少好的结构和词组，如thank you for doing something谢谢你做某事、not only… but also不仅…而且、Apart from除了、 For instance例如, turn out to be结果是、By the way顺便说等。文章结构紧凑，没有废话。是一篇优良之作。

考点：考查应用文写作。