Question

One day, a poor boy was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal he asked for a drink of water. She thought he looked hungry so she brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I own you?” “You don't owe me anything,” she replied, “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” “Then I thank you from the bottom of my heart.” With these words, Howard Kelly left that house.

Year later the woman became badly ill and was finally sent to the hospital in a big city. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Dressed in his doctor's clothes, Dr. Kelly went into her room and recognized her at once. From that day on, he gave special attention to her, and decided to do his best to save her life.

After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly asked the business office to pass the final bill to him. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side. The bill was sent to her room. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off. Finally she looked, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention: “Paid in full with a glass of milk. Dr. Howard Kelly.”

【写作内容】

1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120词对“帮助他人”的话题进行讨论，内容包括：

1) 你从这个故事领悟到什么道理？

2) 举一个例子说明当你遇到困难时，你的朋友是怎么做的？

3) 你是如何报答你朋友的帮助的？

【写作要求】

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

When a poor boy was hungry, a young woman gave hem a glass of milk. Years later, as a famous doctor, he saved the woman’s life and paid the final bill for her in return for her earlier help. (39 words)

Greatly inspired by the story, I learn that we should always be ready to help those in need and that once helped by others, we should be grateful to others and try to repay them or pass on the kindness.

The story reminds me of one of my own experiences. One Friday night, school was over and I was about to go home when it started to rain heavily. Having left my umbrella at home, I could do nothing but wait helplessly in the classroom, feeling increasingly worried with every minute passing by. Just at this moment, Henry offered to lend me his umbrella, which I think he might need for the weekend. But he insisted that he could share one with others since he stayed in the school dormitory and that I should go home at once before it was too late. Little act as it might seem, Henry’s kindness and willingness to help greatly impressed me.

It happened that several days before the mid-term exam, Henry fell seriously ill and had to stay in hospital for days, as a result of which, he missed some lessons and was very worried. I went to the hospital to accompany him every day, helping him make up for his lessons. Eventually, he got good marks in the exam, which delighted both of us.

【解析】

试题分析：该题要求将一篇较长的短文用30字概写出来，同时要完成一篇与该实例相关的文章，需要考生对文章主旨的把握和主要信息提炼整合能力，难度较大。本文记叙了一个帮助与感恩的故事，一位小男孩在困窘饥饿的时候受到了一位年轻女士大方无私的帮助，他从中感受到了力量与希望，长大后成为了一名著名的医生，在那位年轻妇女此时已是重病缠身，后来他知道了这位女士就是当年的恩人后，努力帮助救治她并帮她付清了债务，后来她也痊愈了的故事。

【亮点分析】1、文章脉络结构清晰，先用30 字概括了信息的内容，然后写自己的收获与感悟，再举自己在雨中受助的例子，后来再写在生病期间跟他补课，回报他人，整体框架严密。2、灵活运用了多种句型，现在分词作状语、非谓语等形式，如：Greatly inspired by the story, I……；The story reminds me of one of my own experiences,；Having left my umbrella at home, I , feeling； I went to the hospital to accompany him every day, helping him make up for his lessons.使文章丰富有内涵，流利连贯。3、使用了固定短语、构造了好句，宾语从句、定语从句等，如：,be grateful to，was about to go home,he insisted that he could share，It happened that, as a result of which，从上述例子中不难看出作者遣词造句的能力，文章鲜活有力度。4、恰当使用连词，是文章逻辑清楚，如：Just at this moment, Eventually等，层次分明，文章流畅。

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