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6．假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业，针对这种现象，请你以My opinion on copying others'homework为题谈谈你自己的看法．

主要原因	作业量大，偏难
	对功课不感兴趣，懒惰
	完成任务，取悦老师
危害及解决办法	抄袭不对，违反校规
	要诚实，勤奋学习
	有困难可请教同学和老师
个人看法	------

注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥
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3．词数：150字左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据要点提示，首先要注意文章分段，这篇文章应该分三段，第一段是学生抄作业的主要原因，第二段写这种现象的危害及解决办法，第三段写自己的观点，陈述要点要全面，不能遗漏，对自己的观点要有理有据，写出令人信服的理由来，在写作时，要有意识的用一些复杂句．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：如：It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．这是that引导的主语从句，It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型）这是which引导的非限制性定语从句．另外在写作时，也要注意考虑关联的问题：如：On one hand，On the other hand，In a word，For another，As far as I'm concerned，都可以借鉴．
It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，lazy and uninterested in their lessons，some students copy others'homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers．（高分句型二）
For another，copying others'homework too often，we will lose the ability that can help us to think．（高分句型三）

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
       It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．On one hand，we students have to do a large amount of homework both at home and at school．It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型一）On the other hand，lazy and uninterested in their lessons，some students copy others'homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers．（高分句型二）
       In a word，copying others'homework is a bad habit．For one thing，it's against the rules of the school．We should be honest and work hard to achieve high grades．If we have difficulties，we can turn to our teachers and our classmates for help．For another，copying others'homework too often，we will lose the ability that can help us to think．（高分句型三）
       As far as I'm concerned，it's for our own sake to study．We should do our best to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．