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假如你是李华。最近，你校举办了一次“成长记录袋”展示活动，请你结合下列内容，给你的笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍这项活动，并谈谈你的感受。

时间/地点：2012年3月9日下午4∶30－6∶00。学校展厅。

活动主题：促进学生的发展。

活动要求：每班选出10个优秀“成长记录袋”参展。

记录袋内容包括：

1．学生作品或成绩；

2．成长的足迹；

3．评价或感想。

活动内容：

1．全体学生观看展览；

2．评委现场打分决定名次。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信件格式已为你给出。

参考词汇：成长记录袋portfolio(s)；评价assessment

Dear Peter：

I am writing to tell you about an exhibition in our school．________________

Answer 1

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解析：

Dear Peter, 　　I am writing to tell you about an exhibition in our school．The exhibition of portfolios was held in the Exhibition Hall of our school from 4∶00 to 6∶00 on the afternoon of March 9, 2012．It was to promote students’ development by viewing their self-made portfolios．Each class selected 10 best portfolios to participate．A variety of things involved in students’ growth were in the portfolios, such as pictures of their art works and prizes, some meaningful materials in the process of their growth, assessment from their parents, friends and teachers and their reflection, etc．After all the students and judges finished watching the portfolios, the judges scored each participant on the spot．Those who received the highest scores were awarded by our school． 　　The activity, thought highly of by all the students and teachers, provides a platform for students to display their talents and achievements, allowing other students to learn．The portfolios witness the students’ growing experiences, which is beneficial to their development． 　　Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua