Question

【题目】假如你是高一新生李华，请你根据以下要点，给你的美国朋友Tom写一封信，介绍你的高一英语老师Miss Lin：教我们两个多月了；美丽、活泼、善良；有耐心，上课生动形象易于理解；在课上，很严厉，没人敢在她的课上说话；课下与学生们相处很好，都喜欢与她交谈；良师益友。

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，字数100左右。

Dear Tom,

I’m so happy to write to tell you something about my new English teacher, Miss Lin.

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m so happy to write to tell you something about my new English teacher, Miss Lin.

She has been teaching us for about two months. She is very beautiful, kind and seems to be active all the time. She is also patient and her class is lively and interesting. She can explain everything so clearly that all of us can understand. However, she is strict with us in class. In fact, no one dare speak in her class unless she tells us to. But after class, she gets on well with us. She often talks about our studies, our families and so on. All of us enjoy talking with her. She is not only our teacher but also our good friend.

Can you tell me something about your school and teachers?

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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