题目内容
假设你是Linda ,你现在正感到生活不快乐,不健康,有压力,可又不知道如何改变自己的生活方式,于是写信给你的一个好朋友,请求他/她提些建议。
下面是你的朋友提的几点建议,请你按照以下内容给Linda回一封信(约100词左右)
1.要有足够的睡眠,至少8小时,这样才能精力充沛(energetic adj.)、学习积极(active)。
2.多锻炼是非常重要的。
3.多吃水果和蔬菜,不要吃垃圾食品(junk food)。
4.学习之余听听音乐可以减轻压力。
5.尽可能地微笑,它会帮助你快乐、忘记烦恼。
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
If you want to be healthy and happy , you need to have a healthy lifestyle.I have some advice for you and I hope you will follow all of it .As a young student, you need to get enough sleep ,so you need to try to go to bed earlier eery night .You should try to sleep for at least 8 hours every day .That will help you be active and energetic for your day at school .Doing more exercise is also very important ,and you should remember to eat more vegetables and fruits .You mustn’t eat junk food .It can reduce your stress to listen to music sometimes after studying .Often smiling as often as possible can help you stay happy and forget your trouble .
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达要求给朋友写信提些建议,写作时要注意以下几点:1.要点要全面,包括(1).要有足够的睡眠,至少8小时,这样才能精力充沛、学习积极。(2)多吃水果和蔬菜,不要吃垃圾食品(junk food)。(3)学习之余听听音乐可以减轻压力。(4)尽可能地微笑,它会帮助你快乐、忘记烦恼。2.使用一般现在时。3.用第一人称。4要注意书信的格式。5.使用高级词汇和句型结构。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,语言通顺流畅,句式结构多样,是一篇较好的范文。在文中作者开门见山提出写信的目的,然后提出自己的建议,层次非常清晰。文中使用了动名词短语doing more exercise,介词短语as a young student, at least,等等,使语言简洁明了。还用到了条件状语从句If you want to be healthy and happy ,并列句,and you should remember to eat more vegetables and fruits等,这给朴素的语言带来了亮点。
考点:考查提纲作文