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某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生学习问题。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1.描述在过去三年你遇到的一次学习上的困难以及怎样克服困难的;

2.你对学习中困难的认识;

3.请你对高中生解决学习上的困难提两条建议。

注意:

1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

 

As we grow up, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study.

 

 

 

 

 

 

A possible version:

As we grow up, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study. A difficulty I encountered was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English, making everyone laugh at me. Confronted with the difficulty, I bought lots of CDs of native speakers' public speaking, and tried to imitate their intonation every day. Besides, I often turned to the teacher for help, who always helped correct my pronunciation. As a result, I made great progress.

We may inevitably meet some difficulties in our study, but each man is the architect of his own fate and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties, due to which we become tougher.

To cope with our difficulties in study, we are supposed to find out the reasons first. What’s more, consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problem. Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.

【解析】

试题分析:本次作文是个提纲作文。写作重点有三个:1. 过去三年遇到的学习困难及如何克服地。2.你的认识。3.建议。因为要写过去,并且要进行总结,所以基本时态:在描写过去时,要用过去时;在进行总结和建议时,要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本文使用“三段式”对要点进行表述,要点清晰,行为流畅。在写作中遵从了“短语优先原则”,例如: are bound to ,To cope with ,are supposed to,contribute a lot to ,给文章增添了光彩。而且,与此同时作者注意了“句式多变的原则”,文章里水到渠成地使用了从句、非谓语、倒装等等,例如“A difficulty I encountered was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English, making everyone laugh at me.”“Confronted with the difficulty,…”“Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.”,这一方面体现了作者的综合运用语言的能力,另一方面也使该篇文章成为考场上的难得的佳作。

 

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Family, friends, laughter; beautiful grass, fresh air and live music echoing (回响) off the forest and the Great Wall that surround this place. A weekend in this music paradise(乐园) just seems too short. Besides, a brand new world-class outdoor theater has just been open at this year’s festival, which will surely make the festival a better and more permanent experience.

A full house is before the new outdoor amphitheater (圆形剧场). Even the thunderstorm couldn’t break up the crowd completely absorbed in the music. Thanks to the new theater, this year’s Great Wall Forest Festival offers even more superb acoustics(音效的)and an overall outdoor theatrical experience, even though the project is still half complete.

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“Before music was reserved for the professionals. But folk songs made young people realize that they can express themselves through music as well. And that’s what characterizes folk songs. It’s popular music and it always has a story.” said Lao Lang.

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Great music and scenery aside, many children’s workshops, master music classes, and interactive art activities have also been introduced this year. If music is the reason to come to the festivals, you’ll find even more reasons not to leave.

1.What is the meaning of the underlined phrase “kick back” in Paragraph 1?

A. to hit with legs. B. to work harder

C. to relax oneself D. to make people leave

2.Which of the following is NOT true?

A. The place where the Festival is held is near the Great Wall.

B. The completed project adds to the attraction of this year’s Festival.

C. The audience attending the festival bury themselves in the music.

D. The year 2010 saw the beginning of the Great Wall Forest Festival.

3.The 2014 Great Wall Forest Festival has got improved in the following aspects except that _________.

A. it has included different types of music

B. it has attracted a wide range of audiences

C. it has introduced more activities besides music

D. it has been expanded from 2 days to 4 days in a week

4.According to Lao Lang, we can know that _________.

A. folk songs can help amateur singers become famous easily

B. folk songs are the ones just intended for the professionals

C. a folk song, always with a story, belongs to popular music

D. popular songs are used by the young to express themselves

 

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