题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Martin写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐的魅力所在,并说明你喜欢的两种音乐类型及其原因。
音乐的魅力 | 1.心情愉悦,减轻压力,给人以鼓舞。 |
2.抚慰心灵,了解国外文化。 | |
喜欢的音乐 | 1.流行音乐:旋律优美。 |
2.传统音乐:使人安静,领悟生活的真谛。 |
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.为使行文连贯,可适当增加内容;
3.参考词汇:tune 曲调。
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【答案】I am very glad to have the chance to talk about the functions of music and my favorites with you. Music plays an important role in our life. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure of study. Second, music can excite and encourage us whenever we meet troubles. What’s more, music can have a comforting effect when we are worried and help us step out of difficulty. Besides, music can be of great help on the way to understanding other cultures.
I like both pop music and traditional music. Pop music can bring me both excitement and lovely tunes. Traditional music brings me different pleasure. It can show me the peaceful side of the world and can even tell me the true meaning of life.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇图表类作文。要求考生写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐的魅力所在,并说明你喜欢的两种音乐类型及其原因。考生需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本文中给出的要点比较具体,主要包括:1.音乐的魅力:1)心情愉悦,减轻压力,给人以鼓舞。2)抚慰心灵,了解国外文化。2. 喜欢的音乐:1)流行音乐:旋律优美。2)传统音乐:使人安静,领悟生活的真谛。考生注意准确表达。写作时要准确运用时态和语态,以及过渡词和连接词,使上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】范文中运用了一些高级语法和句式:…thus helping reduce our pressure of study使用了现在分词作结果状语;…whenever we meet troubles使用了让步状语从句;…when we are worried and help us step out of difficulty使用了时间状语从句; Besides, music can be of great help on the way to understanding other cultures.这个句子运用到be of+名词,相当于be+adj;其次过渡词First… Second…;What’s more;Besides增强了文章的连贯性。