Question

日常生活中，越来越多的人选择用手机短信的方式送祝福。据报道，有些人在元旦一天之内就收发了数百条新年祝福短信。请你以“More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages”为题目，按以下要点用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。

1、描述以上有关手机短信互送祝福的情况；

2、分析原因（如手机的普遍使用、方便快捷、费用纸……）

3、简短评论。

注意：短文的标题已给出（不计入总词数）

More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages

An increasing number of people are sending holiday greetings by text messages. Some people are even reported to have sent and received hundreds of such messages on New Year’s Day.

With the wide use of mobile phones, text messages have become an essential way of communication. With a mobile phone you can greet others whenever and wherever you like. Moreover, the cost of sending a message is so low that nearly everyone can afford it. Modern technology even makes it possible for a user to send greetings in a more vivid way.

However, we can’t be blind to the disadvantages it brings to us. Sometimes, a single message will be copied

many times and sent to different people, which is not a good way to show your care and true feelings. Anyway, we

shouldn’t neglect the true meaning of festivals and greetings

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】

范文运用一些常见的短语be even reported to have done 据报道某人已经，，；a way of ..的方式；Moreover, the cost of sending a message is so low that nearly everyone can afford it.这个句子中运用了so …that如此以致于；Modern technology even makes it possible for a user to send greetings in a more vivid way.这个句子中运用到make it adj to do sth 这个句型，it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式；Sometimes, a single message will be copied many times and sent to different people, which is not a good way to show your care and true feelings.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句。

考点： 提纲类作文