Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你班上周组织主题为“平安校园”法制教育系列活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：平安校园：Safe Campus

法律意识：legal awareness

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week ,our school organized an activity with the theme “safe campus”which will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.

At the class meeting, our teacher stressed the importance of safety at school.After that,,our PE teacher gave us a lecture.Accidents can happen easily at school. We searched the internet for related information .Besides, to reaise more students’leagal awareness,we made a poster.The next day,we went to the campus to find our demonstration .Back home,I shared what I had learned with my parents .

Through the experiene,I deeply realize the importance of safety at school.

【解析】

本文属于图画作文，根据图画内容写一篇短文投稿。

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你班上周组织主题为“平安校园”法制教育系列活动的全过程。

分析四幅图可知，图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我参加平安校园活动的过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。