假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven．He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees．My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting for．
One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue．Just then a bird was flying over us．My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird．Neither of the arrows hit the target．Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky，what looked like rain!We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured．
That day I didn't learn from much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

分析文章讲述了一次打猎的经历．我和父亲还有叔叔们去打猎．当我们在吃烧烤时，有鸟雀从我们头上飞过，叔叔马上射箭，可惜没射中．箭从空中掉下来，还好没人受伤．那天我学到了很多东西，特别是地球的引力．

解答 My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven．He wanted∧teach me about animals，insects and trees．My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting for．
One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue．Just then a bird was flying over us．My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird．Neither of the arrows hit the target．Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky，what looked like rain!We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured．
That day I didn't learn from much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
详解：
1．加to；短语搭配错误．want to do sth想要做某事．
2．come改为came；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去发生的动作，要用一般过去时态．
3．have改为having；分词错误．句中有逗号分隔，没有连词，要用非谓语动词；have与we构成主谓关系，要用现在分词作伴随状语．
4．immediate改为immediately；副词错误．句中immediate修饰动词jumped，要用副词．
5．Neither改为none；代词错误．句意表达的是三个以上的东西，要用none来构成全部否定，neither表示两个都不．
6．was改为were；主谓一致错误．句中的主语arrows是复数，谓语动词要保持一致．
7．what改为which；连词错误．句中looked like rain修饰前面的名词arrows，是一个非限制性定语从句；从句缺少主语，且先行词arrows指物，要用which来引导．
8．but改为and；连词错误．句意表达的是并列，不是转折．
9．去掉from；定语搭配错误．learn from向…学习；句意表达的是学会，不要加介词．
10．a改为an；冠词错误．句中inpressive是以元音开头的单词，要用an来限定．