题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,近期你所在城市的空气质量越来越差。某英文报纸就此现象进行征稿。请你简要分析空气污染的原因,并提出有效的解决措施。内容包括:
1.分析原因;
2.解决措施;
3.呼吁。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently the air quality of the city I live in is becoming worse and worse. _________________________________
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【答案】Recently the air quality of the city I live in is becoming worse and worse. It does great harm to people’s health. The reasons for the serious air pollution are as follows.
Firstly, some factories give off waste gases into the air. Besides, some people’s bad behaviour is the source of air pollution, such as smoking, spitting and throwing the rubbish everywhere.
Effective measures should be taken to reduce air pollution. On the one hand, strict laws must be made to punish those factories which are still polluting the air. On the other hand, it’s every citizen’s duty to go out by bus instead of using private cars.
Personally speaking, all of us should spare no effort to devote ourselves to improving the air quality to make our living environment clean and beautiful.
【解析】试题分析:
本文是写给报社的征稿,针对近期所在城市的空气质量越来越差,分析空气污染的原因,并提出有效的解决措施。文章给出了提纲,成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全,三方面内容齐全:1.分析原因;2.提出解决措施;3.呼吁。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:被动语态的使用Effective measures should be taken to reduce air pollution.;使用了定语从句On the one hand, strict laws must be made to punish those factories which are still polluting the air..;it做形式主语On the other hand, it’s every citizen’s duty to go out by bus instead of using private cars.2.使用了过渡词语:Firstly,Besides,On the one hand,On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短语:do harm to对…造成伤害;as follows列举如下;give off释放,发出;instead of而不是,代替;spare no effort不遗余力。