Question

When my twenty birthday came, I was not at home.                    1．       

In order to celebrate such important day with my                                   2．       

parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them                          3．       

for having raised me for twenty years, and expressed                          4．       

my love for them. Later Mother talked me that when they                    5．       

read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. But Father                             6．       

appeared much cool. After that, he read it alone carefully,                     7．       

and then he put in up into a desk drawer. I can imagine the                   8．       

scene clear because I know Father. Being a man with few                    9．       

word, he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way.                  10．       

Answer 1

1．twenty→twentieth       2．such后加an        3．him→them           4．√

5．talked→told                6．去掉were            7．去掉much或much→very

8．up→away                   9．clear→clearly       10．word→words