Question

5．假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席，为增强学生安全意识，你校本周五下午准备进行一次消防演习，请你代表学生会写一份书面通知，内容要点如下：
1．活动目的；2．活动时间；
3．活动安排：①听到火警铃后有序撤离 ②听专业消防员进行安全教育 ③…（内容自拟）
4．活动之后，写出感受．
注意：1．短文词数不少于100；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：消防演习fire drill   消防通道 fire-fighting accesses
消防隐患 potential fire hazard．

Answer 1

分析 这是一份通知，属于应用文的范畴．写作时，首先要注意写全要点，包括：时间，活动安排，感受；其次要注意用第一人称；最后要注意时态以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
provide sth for sb 提供某物给某人
be supposed to 应该
put out fires 灭火
in case of 以防万一
when hearing the fire alarm，everyone should quickly but in order leave buildings through the fire-fighting accesses and go to the playground．
句中when连接一个时间状语从句，从句省略了主语和系动词，即when everyone is hearing the fire alarm．
Then，a professional firefighter will give a lecture about safety knowledge and show us the ways to put out fires．
句中and连接并列谓语．
We should know the skill to escape from the fire in case of emergency．
句中to escape from the fire作目的状语．

解答 Notice
   A fire drill will be held in our school on Friday afternoon this week in order to improve everyone's awareness of fire safety and provide fire safety training for us．【说明活动】
   We are supposed to perform as follows：when hearing the fire alarm，everyone should quickly but in order leave buildings through the fire-fighting accesses and go to the playground．（高分句型一）Then，a professional firefighter will give a lecture about safety knowledge and show us the ways to put out fires．（高分句型二） After the lecture，all the students should go to inspect the dormitories/classrooms for potential fire hazards and clear them．【具体要求】
   After the activity，every student is asked to give a summary of this fire drill．We should know the skill to escape from the fire in case of emergency．（高分句型三）【总结感受】
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点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．