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11．假设你是李华，某英语报发起了题为"我看00后"的论坛活动．请根据以下要点用英语给报社编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的看法．内容包括：
1.00后的优点：乐于接受并尝试新事物；珍惜友情；
00后的不足：依赖性强；自控力差；
2．你的看法．
注意：1．书信的头尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文章必须包括以上所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．词数100左右．
参考词汇：00后  the post-2000's generation
Dear Editor，
Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
As teenagers，many of them are dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．Worse still，lacking the ability to control themselves seems to be common among them．However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）Moreover，they treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
They are such a promising generation．I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假设你是李华，某英语报发起了题为"我看00后"的论坛活动．请根据以下要点用英语给报社编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的看法   写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：00后的优点：乐于接受并尝试新事物；珍惜友情；00后的不足：依赖性强；自控力差；你的看法．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be dependent on 对…依赖；Worse still更糟糕的是；However然而；be fond of 喜欢；Moreover而且；be good at擅长；
Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）
I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      Knowing that you are gathering opinions on the post-2000's generation，I'm writing to share my idea．（高分句型一）
      As teenagers，many of them are dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．Worse still，lacking the ability to control themselves seems to be common among them．However，they are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them，which makes them ore creative．（高分句型二）Moreover，they treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
     They are such a promising generation．I strongly believe，that they will create a better future with proper guiding．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．