Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的朋友林涛面对全新的高中学习感到有些迷茫和无所适从，希望你给他一些学习方法方面的指导和建议。请结合以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件：

1．制定生活学习计划，合理安排时间；

2．课前预习，课上认真听讲、做笔记，课后复习；

3．劳逸结合。

注意：1、词数100字左右（开头己给出，但不计入总词数）；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：preview预习

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork. _______

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork. I’d like to give you some tips to help you deal with the problem.

First, you should make a schedule about your life and study, which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order.

Secondly, you should preview the new lessons before class and review what you have learned after class. In class, you should listen to the teacher carefully and try to make notes.

Thirdly, don’t forget to combine study with pleasure. Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can. As you know, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble with your schoolwork.非限制性定语从句的使用：you should make a schedule about your life and study, which can help you organize your time well and do everything in perfect order.时间状语从句的使用：Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can.连接词的恰当使用使文章结构层次清楚：Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly。