Question

假设今天是7月12日（星期六），天气晴朗，你和全班同学到南郊公园（Nanjiao Park）游玩。请根据以下内容，以日记的形式记叙今天你的出游情况。
1. 上午乘车1小时到达目的地，爬山、唱歌、做游戏；
2. 中午吃完午餐后组织一个小活动，向游客宣传环保的重要性；
3. 下午4时返回。
注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
July 12, Saturday                                Fine
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Answer 1

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July 12, Saturday                                Fine
      Today I went on a trip to Nanjiao Park with all my classmates. After an hour’s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to climb the hill. All the way up, we sang happily. On top of the hill, we played some interesting games. All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.
After we had our picnic at noon, we organized an activity, talking to the visitors about the importance of protecting the environment. At about 4 in the afternoon we returned.
We not only had a good time but also did a good deed today. Though I am tired now, I feel quite happy.

解析试题分析：这是一篇以写日记形式的作文，注意日记的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
考点：考查综合能力
点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。