题目内容
【题目】假设你叫李华,是一名高三学生。你将参加某所著名大学的自主招生考试。根据要求,你需要用英语写一封自荐信,介绍自己的情况。你的自荐信包括如下内容:
1、自我介绍和写信的目的;
2、你自身的优势和未来的打算;
3、报考这个学校的原因;
4、希望能被录取。
注意:1、词数为100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I’m Li Hua ._______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
I sincerely hope you will consider this application .
Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I am going to graduate from senor high school in June. I’m writing to introduce myself.
I’m one of the top students in my school. I love arts very much and I like reading. Besides doing well in my lessons, I am good at logical thinking and reasoning. I plan to major in law so that I can become a lawyer and put my talent to good use in the future.
As we all know, your university is famous worldwide, with plenty of advanced teaching facilities and many famous professors. I expect to study there and make my dream come true by working hard. If I am accepted, I will make full use of my time to work on my lessons and improve myself in all aspects.
I do hope to be admitted to your university. I consider it a great honor to be part of it.
I sincerely hope you will consider this application.
Yours’
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类短文,同时也属于应用文中的自荐信。使用第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点:1、自我介绍和写信的目的;2、你自身的优势和未来的打算;3、报考这个学校的原因;4、希望能被录取。提纲类作文的要点都给了出来,在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点。
【范文亮点】:本文的亮点在于连接词的使用,如Besides;另外高级句式的使用也较多,如. As we all know, your university is famous worldwide, with plenty of advanced teaching facilities and many famous professors.中的定语从句用法。If I am accepted, I will make full use of my time to work on my lessons and improve myself in all aspects.中的if从句等。