题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,是一名高三学生。上周你的英国笔友Paul来信,向你询问即将面临高中毕业有什么感想。请你用英文给他回一封信。内容包括:
1.收获与感悟;
2.叙述离别之情;
3.对未来的展望。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
Facing the graduation, I have no words to express my complicated feelings. How time flies! I have learned a lot from studying for these three precious years. For example, when I first attended his high school, I didn’t know how to get along well with others. What’s worse, it took me long to adapt myself to the new environment. But now, in addition to the excellent academic performance, I have made lots of good friends and become as independent as an adult.
Therefore, I feel terribly sorry to say goodbye to my dear teachers and classmates soon. I can’t imagine what I would be like without them. Hopefully, I will be admitted into an ideal university and become stronger and more responsible in future.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是李华,是一名高三学生。上周你的英国笔友Paul来信,向你询问即将面临高中毕业有什么感想。请你用英文给他回一封信。内容包括:1.收获与感悟;2.叙述离别之情;3.对未来的展望。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英文书信。格式正确,内容齐全,布局合理,同时使用高级句子。Facing the graduation, I have no words to express my complicated feelings.现在分词做时间状语;when I first attended his high school, I didn’t know how to get along well with others. when引导时间状语从句;it took me long to adapt myself to the new environment.动词不定式做真正的主语;I can’t imagine what I would be like without them.宾语从句用在句中;I will be admitted into an ideal university and become stronger and more responsible in future.比较级使用巧妙;另外,For example, What’s worse, in addition to---,Therefore, Hopefully,为文章增色添彩。