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3．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友特德正在你市某所学校作交换生，他想寻求一份兼职工作，写信向你求助．你校英文报拟招聘一名兼职英文编辑，请根据所给信息及要求，给他回一封信．内容包括：
1．希望它能考虑这份工作；
2．简单介绍工作内容：撰写新闻报道、校对及制定编辑计划（editorial plans）等；
3．联系方式：电话：0351-7773957，邮箱：xiaobao@126．com
注意：1．词数120字左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
          2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Ted，
I'm writing to tell you that our school English newspaper wants a part-time English editor．       ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，给William写一封信．要点包括：1．希望它能考虑这份工作；2．简单介绍工作内容：撰写新闻报道、校对及制定编辑计划（editorial plans）等；3．联系方式：电话：0351-7773957，邮箱：xiaobao@126．com．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：part-time job（兼职工作）；think about（考虑）；In addition（另外，此外）；be  good at （擅长于）；be suited for （适合做…，适合于）；be  interested in （对…感兴趣）； call at （拨打电话）；Look forward to（盼望，期待）．
高分句型：1．Since you have been looking for a part-time job，I hope you can think about this position．
                 since意为"既然，由于"，引导一个原因状语从句．
                 2．For this job，you will ①be asked to write news reports and find and correct mistakes in newspapers ②before they're printed．
                  ①此处运用了被动语态；②before引导一个时间状语从句．

解答 Dear Ted，
I'm writing to tell you that our school English newspaper wants a part-time English editor．Since you have been looking for a part-time job，I hope you can think about this position（高分句型一）．
For this job，you will be asked to write news reports and find and correct mistakes in newspapers before they're printed（高分句型二）．In addition，making editorial plans is another important task．You are good at English and computers．Therefore，I'm sure you'll be well suited for it．It is a good opportunity that you shouldn't miss．If you are interested in this job，please call at 0351-7773957 or send your personal information and application toxiaobao@126．com．
Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．