Question

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

Answer 1

1.Before----ago

2.去掉for

3.Unfortunate----Unfortunately

4.week----weeks

5.so----but

6.Will----would

7.myself---me

8.farther-----far

9.interested-----interesting

10.knew后加the

【解析】

1.efore----ago 汉语的“两年前”译成英语应是 two years ago。

2.去掉for 英语“租车”的说法是 rent a car，其中，rent 是及物动词，直接后接名词作宾语。

3.Unfortunate----Unfortunately 副词修饰一句话

4.week----weeks 把 two 后面的 week 改成 weeks，因为前面有two修饰。

5.so----but so - but行文逻辑错误。表“转折”

6.ill----would 根据前面的knew，所以用过去式

7.myself---me 只有主语为I时才接反身代词

8.farther-----far be far away 很远。

9.interested-----interesting 修饰物，解释为令人感兴趣的

10.knew后加the 考查冠词。句意：大家都知道这个事实，表示特指。

考点：短文改错。