Question

书面表达（满分25分）

学校英语角准备就Living in the city 为主题，进行有关城市生活利弊的讨论，请你根据下面表格内容提示，写一篇100字左右的短文。首句已给出，不要逐字翻译，可以适当发挥。

Advantages	Disadvantages
工作机会多	生活消费高
交通便利	人口多、拥挤
有公园、饭店等休闲场所	空气污染、居住环境差

 

Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages… _____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find jobs. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat at good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.

However, living in the city is often very expensive. You must find a well paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and polluted. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。主题Living in the city，进行有关城市生活利弊的讨论，这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：考查议论文

点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。