题目内容
现在很多中学生出国留学。据《环球时报》报道,澳大利亚驻华使馆去年签发的留学签证有50%给了高中生。假设你是学生李华,请给某报编辑写一封信,根据以下所给要求,明确表示赞成还是反对中学生出国留学。
赞成观点:(1)与中国教育相比,国外教育有诸多优点,如……
(2)在国外接受教育,可以培养学生诸多方面的能力,如……
反对观点:(1)与中国教育相比,国外教育可能存在诸多问题,如……
(2)过早留学可能给学生在精神上、学习上及经济上造成诸多负面影响,如……
注:1. 除以上内容,你可陈述赞成或反对的其他理由。2. 词数100-120个。
Dear editor,
I think/don’t think
Dear editor,
I think it is good to send teenagers abroad for further study.
Compared with China’s education, foreign education has many advantages.
It has a good education sense, pays special attention to the training of students’ abilities and creates relaxing self-study atmosphere for them.
In foreign schools, we don’t have to bear a heavy learning load as we do in China, and therefore we can learn more and better.
In foreign countries, we have more chances to learn about foreign culture, customs and habits, which can broaden our mind.
Though we have to look after ourselves abroad and maybe life is hard for us, it will help us train our ability to live independently and deal with problems.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据所给提示给某报编辑写一封信,表明自己对中学生出国留学的态度--赞成或者反对。赞成的要点包括:国外教育的优点;培养学生的能力;反对的要点包括:国外教育存在诸多问题;在学习、经济等方面给学生带来压力。可以写赞成中学生留学,也可以写反对中学生留学;词数在100-120词之间;注意时态的正确使用;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文从赞成中学生留学这个角度进行写作,并阐述了出国留学的一些优点。
范文使用了宾语从句it is good to send teenagers abroad;非谓语动词Compared with China’s education;定语从句①as we do in China,②which can broaden our mind;让步状语从句;Though we have to look after ourselves等语法知识,使作文句式多样,也避免了表达单调;
范文使用了一些固定短语pays special attention, learn about, look after, deal with等,使作文内容得到充实。
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