题目内容
18．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分．
Our English teacher，Ms．Joan，came to our school in 1986．She taught English for nearly 31years so far．She works hardly and has been a model teacher for ages．
She is kind to us but she is rather strict with us as well．She always encourages ourselves to speak and read more English．She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interested．She is not only our teacher and also our friend．We students love and respect for her．
Tomorrow she is going to attend a important meeting，at which she will be given a medal for his advanced deeds．We both sincerely congratulate her on achieving so extraordinary achievements．
分析 本文主要介绍作者的英语老师Ms．Joan．她从教31年，多年里是模范老师，对学生要求严格，使得每堂课生动有趣，学生们都爱戴和尊敬她．
解答 Our English teacher，Ms．Joan，came to our school in 1986．She∧taught English for nearly 31years so far．She works hardly and has been a model teacher for ages．
She is kind to us but she is rather strict with us as well．She always encourages ourselves to speak and read more English．She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interested．She is not only our teacher and also our friend．We students love and respect for her．
Tomorrow she is going to attend a important meeting，at which she will be given a medal for his advanced deeds．We both sincerely congratulate her on achieving so extraordinary achievements．
详解：
1．加has 考查动词时态．根据时间状语for nearly 31years so far，要用现在完成时态．
2．hardly改为hard 考查词语用法．hardly意为"几乎不"，hard意为"努力地"，此处应是：努力地．
3．ourselves改为us 考查词语用法．encourage sb．to do sth．意为"鼓励某人做某事"，是固定搭配．
4．interested改为interesting 考查形容词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，lively和interesting都是形容词作宾语补足语，interesting意为"有趣的"．
5．and改为but 考查固定搭配．not only…but also…意为"不仅…而且…"，是固定搭配．
6．去掉for 考查词语用法．respect是及物动词，后接宾语时不需要介词for．
7．a改为an 考查冠词． meeting是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指，因important读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
8．his改为her 考查代词．her指代Ms．Joan．
9．both改为all 考查代词．both指代"两者"，此处应是多名学生，要用all，表示"三者及以上"．
10．so改为such 考查固定搭配．such（+adj．）+复数可数名词．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
