题目内容
13.假设你是校报的编辑刘伟,你收到学生李华的来信.请你就来信内容写一封回信,帮他出出主意.Dear editor,
I'm a Senior Three student.I'm unhappy these days.Last Tuesday,I was doing my homework with my favorite MP3on in Self-Study Class.Suddenly my head teacher took my MP3away from behind and the next day he scolded (批评) me before the whole class.I reasoned (理论)with him,only to make things worse.Is there anything wrong enjoying music?What can I do?
回信中应包括以下要点:
1.你也是音乐爱好者;2.音乐的好处;3.音乐和学习关系的处理;
4.老师的意图; 5.和老师沟通.
注意:1.词数:100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear LiHua,
I am sorry thatyou have trouble with your head teacher.From your letter I know you are a music fan.So am I.As everyone knows,music can be a good companion,which can bring you happiness,helping forget worries at school.One can't live happily without music.No wonder you have a great passion for music.If you enjoy music in a proper time as well as in a proper way,you can keep on studying in a better state.I think you should understand your teacher's intention.He just cared too much about you.You'd better have a heart-to-heart talk with him so that you can understand each other much better.I'm sure music is the bridge to the soul.
Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Weri.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
As everyone knows,music can be a good companion,which can bring you happiness,helping forget worries at school
大家都知道,音乐可以是一个好的伴侣,能给你带来快乐,帮助学校忘记烦恼.
高分句型二:
If you enjoy music in a proper time as well as in a proper way,you can keep on studying in a better state.
如果你喜欢在一个适当的方式以及适当的音乐的时候,你可以保持在一个更好的学习状态.
解答 Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry that you have trouble with your head teacher.From your letter I know you are a music fan.So am I.As everyone knows,music can be a good companion,which can bring you happiness,helping forget worries at school(高分句型一).One can't live happily without music.No wonder you have a great passion for music.If you enjoy music in a proper time as well as in a proper way,you can keep on studying in a better state(高分句型二).I think you should understand your teacher's intention.He just cared too much about you.You'd better have a heart-to-heart talk with him so that you can understand each other much better.I'm sure music is the bridge to the soul.
Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Wei.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求
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