Question

假定你是李华，《中国日报》（China Daily）计划面向中学生举办环境保护知识竞赛（Environment - protecting Knowledge Contest），请你作为该报的一名特约通讯员，代表学生会对所在学校的学生写一则海报。
内容主要包括：
1．举办目的（重视环境作用，提高环境保护意识）
2．举办时间（10月14日—31日）
3．参与方法：在报纸上答题；裁下答案，在截止日期前邮寄至《中国日报》。
4．希望同学们平时留意环保方面的知识并踊跃参加。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．海报开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
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Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
I order to get us high school students to attach importance to the environments and improve our environment-protecting awareness, China Daily is planning to hold an Environment-protecting Knowledge Contest.
The contest will start on October 14th and end on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. Your answers should be cut down from the newspaper and sent to China Daily before the deadline.
I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这是提纲式作文，要点已经给出，而且很详细，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】这篇范文要点全面，语言简洁，但是不缺乏高级词汇和句型：be connected with和…有联系， attach importance to重视，cut down剪下， Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.这句话用了不定式做状语。