Question

【题目】请就“父母与子女的良好关系”发表你的看法，包括如下要点：

(1)父母与子女关系良好的重要性;

(2)你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的;

(3)如何才能建立这种关系?

注意：无需写标题，文章第一句已经给出。要求词数110左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. Parents always show love and concern for us. They are our good listeners，advisers and supporters. With their help，we can overcome many difficulties in our life.

In my opinion，the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love，care and understanding，in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely.

To build a relationship of this kind，parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children. (117 words)

【解析】题目中明确要求：请就“父母与子女的良好关系”发表看法，首先，同学们要点明父母与子女关系良好的重要性；然后要明确地指出你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的；最后说明如何才能建立这种关系等等。同学们要能适当把握三个部分的内容，使文章内容相协调，使用恰当的连接词，使语义连贯，连接顺畅。

【范文亮点】

范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：show love and concern for参加，overcome many difficulties发生 ，be filled with上传， as well as除此之外，等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如倒装句Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.……，定语从句in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. 等等。