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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
No matter how bad things get, something good is out there, just over the horizon.
注意: 1. 无须写标题;
2. 不得透露个人信息和学校名称;
3. 词数120 左右。

Life is like a spice, where you can taste all sorts of flavour. You can not only experience happiness but also bitterness. Whatever life has given you or you have experienced, believe life is wonderful. Even though you may get frustrated, don’t lose heart. Work hard, deal with the problems and try again, you will see something beautiful before you. It’s just like a rainy day when sometimes we feel annoyed, but we are always looking forward to the fresh air or a colourful rainbow when the rain stops. We should be grateful because we have benefited a lot from life itself. So love life and believe in yourself. There is no doubt that something nice is out there, maybe just over the horizon.

试题分析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文有很多高级的词组:not only …. but also“不但…而且…”, lose heart灰心,looking forward to 渴望,believe in 信任,文章还使用了一些好的句型:Life is like a spice, where you can taste all sorts of flavour. 这句话用了定语从句,Whatever life has given you or you have experienced, believe life is wonderful. 这句话用了让步状语从句, There is no doubt that something nice is out there, maybe just over the horizon.这句话用了固定句型。
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Mountain climbers around the world dream about going up Qomolangma, the highest mountain in the world. But many people who have climbed the mountain have left waste material that is harming the environment.
A team of Americans is planning the largest clean-up effort ever on Qomolangma. They will make the risky trip up the mountain next month.
The team of eight Americans will be guided by more than twenty Sherpas of Nepal(尼泊尔夏尔巴人). Their goal is to remove all the rubbish they see. They will spend two months cleaning up the mountain by gathering oxygen bottles, fuel containers, batteries, drink cans, human waste and all kinds of disposable products(一次性产品). They are expected to remove at least three tons of rubbish in large bags.
Team leader Robert Hoffman is making his fourth trip up the mountain. He says he hopes to bring Qomolangma to the condition it was in before the first successful climb fifty years ago. He says he hopes the effort will influence other people to clean up the environment closer home.
Disposable products on Qomolangma are a major concern. So the clean-up team will take along newly developed equipment to collect and treat disposable products. Over the years, the disposable products have polluted the mountain. In the warm season when the ice melts, the polluted water flows to Nepali villages below. The problem has gotten worse in recent years because climbing Qomolangma has become more popular.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文内容要点;
2.以约120个词就 “Cleaning the World”这个主题写一篇短文,并包括如下要点:
(1)你所居住的地方周围存在怎样的环境问题?
(2)你认为这个问题是什么造成的?
(3)为帮助解决这一问题,你做了什么?
【写作要求】
1.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。

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