题目内容
安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示,写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示:1. 体育锻炼;2. 上下楼梯;3. 交朋结友;4. 食品卫生。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯。
2. 词数:100--150词;短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students
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① Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
②Firstly, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. ③At school, we almost take exercise every day to keep us fit, but before we have such sports as swimming, running, we should make full preparations for them in case some accidents happen.
④Secondly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should walk along the right, and walk slowly.
⑤ As for making friends, especially some Internet friends, keep it in mind that we shouldn’t tell them our personal information. ⑥ Most importantly, we shouldn’t go to meet them alone. ⑦ Last but not least, we had better say no to the junk food, which does great harm to our health.
⑧Only when we keep all these safety rules in mind, can we enjoy a better school life.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据提示写一篇关于校园安全的英语短文。写作要点包括:体育锻炼;上下楼梯;交朋结友;食品卫生等三个方面。词数在100-150词左右,开头不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:范文涵盖了所有的写作要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了定语从句、时间状语从句、宾语从句、倒装句等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:时间状语从句①while we are having sports,②before we have such sports as swimming,③when we go upstairs or downstairs;宾语从句keep it in mind that we shouldn’t tell them our personal information;非限制性定语从句which does great harm to our health;倒装句Only when we keep all these safety rules in mind, can we enjoy a better school life.等,语法知识运用娴熟,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用firstly, at school, secondly, as for, most importantly, last but not least等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了get injured, take care, take exercise, make full preparations for, keep fit, in case, make friends, had better等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。
考点:材料类作文