Question

 

     假定英语课堂上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

     删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

     修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

      2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

My interest has been in books instead  in food since I went to high school. In the past I was real interested in all kinds of food. In summer day I liked to buy ice cream and cold drink, while in while I liked to buy sweets and some another food. Whenever I went for a walk with my parents I would ask them buy me something. However, after I went to the high school, I found I was putting on weight. So, I had to give up habit of eating my favorite foods. Now I like to spend money on all kinds of books, and my parents were always complaining that I am a money spender.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

1， instead ∧→of  [辨析]  instead of 后面才能跟名词，代词，介词短语等。而instead只能作副词，后面不能跟其他结构。

2， real→really  [辨析] 在英语中，修饰动词，分词，句子等应该用副词，而不用形容词。

3， day→days   [辨析] 可数名词复数形式表示泛指

4， drink→drinks [辨析] drink作“饮料”讲是可数名词。故要用复数形式。

5， another→other  [辨析] 在此句意为“其他一些”，故要用some other。而another表示“另一个”

6， ∧buy→to  [辨析]此句句型为“ask sb to do sth”

7， the→去掉  [辨析] go to high school“上高中”

8， ∧habit→the [辨析] 在此habit为特指“吃最喜爱的食物的习惯”故要加冠词the

9， and→but [辨析] 根据上下文逻辑意义，可知此处表示转折，故用but。

10．were→are   [辨析] 根据最后一句的时间状语now可判断出此处应用一般现在时态。