Question

写作（满分25分）

假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识；

2.自己目前的英语水平；

3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；

4.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是高中一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Rita 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。

【亮点说明】范文中mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.这个句子用了动名词做主语，My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,这个句子用了表语从句，I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.这个句子用了宾语从句。

考点： 提纲类作文