Question

你的朋友Susan转学了,由于性格内向，到了新的环境遇到了一些交友的困难。作为朋友,你想给她些建议。于是你写了一封信,鼓励她努力适应新的环境。要点如下:
1. 要自信,自信的人交友时才有魅力；
2. 与同学交谈时微笑、目视对方；
3. 主动邀请同学一起学习或者就餐时坐在一起；
4. 与同学分享自己的兴趣爱好。
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节。
（开头已给出；不计入总词数）
Dear Susan,
I ’m sorry to hear that you are not getting along well with the students in the new school.______
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Answer 1

Dear Susan, 
I ’m sorry to hear that you are not getting along well with the students in the new school. So I’d like to give you some tips. First, you should be as confident as you can. There’s nothing that attracts people more than someone who has a fairly positive attitude towards life. Next, talking to others, you can make eye contact with them. Smile at them when they look at you, and laugh when they say something that’s funny. It makes you seem friendly. Third, try to invite others to do things together. For example, you can ask them to share a table at lunch or work together while studying. It’s better to share your interest with them. I believe you will find you have a lot in common. Last but not least, don’t be too hard on yourself. Making new friends takes a lot of time and effort. You should be patient. Best wishes and good luck!
Yours, 
Lily

试题分析：考查应用文中的建议信的写作。你的朋友Susan在新的环境遇到了一些交友的困难。要求给她一些建议鼓励她努力适应新的环境。要点是提纲，具体的内容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，围绕中心展开论述，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】范文里面的词组有：getting along well with和…相处好，as confident as you can尽可能自信， make eye contact with眼神交流，have a lot in common和…有相同之处，be hard on对…苛刻，还有范文的句式变化也是一个特点： There’s nothing that attracts people more than someone who has a fairly positive attitude towards life. 这句话用了定语从句， Smile at them when they look at you, and laugh when they say something that’s funny. 这句话用定语从句， For example, you can ask them to share a table at lunch or work together while studying. It’s better to share your interest with them. 这句话用了状语从句的省略， Making new friends takes a lot of time and effort.这句话用了动名词做主语， 还有文章还用了 First, Next, Third, Last but not least,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。