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假如你是李华,你的美国网友Tom想要了解一下你所在学校的校园布局,请你根据下面的简图给他写一封e-mail,描述一下你的学校,并简单表达你对学校的情感。
注意:1. 词数100字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you and I miss you! I’d like to introduce the layout of my school to you. _________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua


Dear Tom,
How are you? I miss you. I’d like to introduce the layout of my school to you.
Entering the campus, you will step on the main path leading through the whole campus. On the left of the crossroads is located the modern laboratory building while our splendid teaching building is on the right where we have fascinating lessons every day. At the end of the main path, the library on the left greets you and the gym is on the opposite side. Happily, we do sports after class in the football field which is between the library and the lab building; the basketball court faces the football field across the main path.
I love my school with students working hard to realize their dreams and teachers training us like our parents. Provided you can visit my school some day, I will show you around it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li hua

解析试题分析:这是一篇话题类作文。假如你是李华,你的美国网友Tom想要了解一下你所在学校的校园布局,请你根据下面的简图给他写一封e-mail,描述一下你的学校,并简单表达你对学校的情感。
需要写的内容已经粗略给出,需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】On the left of the crossroads is located the modern laboratory building while our splendid teaching building is on the right where we have fascinating lessons every day.这里含有一个定语从句。Happily, we do sports after class in the football field which is between the library and the lab building这里含有一个定语从句。
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[写作内容]
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
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