Question

假如你是某英文报刊的记者，请根据以下提示以“A Fire Accident”为题，写一篇80～120个词的新闻报道：

1．起火地点：夏威夷(Hawaiian)大酒店

2．起火时间：2003年12月26日早晨大约5点钟

3．火因：一男服务生吸烟

4．持续时间：近5个小时

5．参加救火人员：市消防队及市民

6．经济损失(damage)：至少900万美元

7．伤亡人数：20人死亡，包括一名14岁女孩，十几人受重伤

8．影响：震惊(shock)全市

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

例文：

A Fire Accident

　　At about 5∶00 in① the morning of December 26,2003, a big fire broke out in Hawaiian Hotel．The fire was caused by a boy waiter smoking carelessly in the hotel．Many city firefighters and great number of city② people fought bravely against the fire until it was complete put out．③ The fire lasted about five hours．It nearly destroyed the whole hotel and caused a damage of at least 9,000,000 dollars．Twenty people including a 14-year-old girl were killed and more than 10 people were badly hurt．The whole city was shocked at the news and this fire accident taught people another lesson．

修改：

　　①in→on在具体某一天的早上，用介词on而不用in．

　　②and great→and a great a great number of大量地，固定短语．

　　③complete→completely修饰动词短语put out，用副词而不是用形容词．

点评：

　　本文按照题目要求，将火灾情况说明得比较全面，行文流畅．如果作者能在语法方面细心一点，避免错误，就更好了．