Question

假如你班要以“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议理由：
保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；
目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心；
与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境；
作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：明确的（definite）评价（estimation）。

Answer 1

No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. Finally, striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.
With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，本作文中给出的要点比较具体,动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. 这句话用了no doubt难怪，Yet what should we do in order to achieve success?这句话是不定式做目的状语， it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. 这句话用it形式主语，not only…but also结构， Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. 这句话用倒装句和宾语从句，we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. 这句话用了定语从句， With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance. 这句话用了with复合结构，还有文章还使用了First, Meanwhile,Besides, Finally,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类写作