Question

【题目】成语（Chinese idioms）是中国文化的重要组成部分，它能用简单的词语表达出丰富并且深刻的意义。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友James对中国成语很感兴趣，向你咨询有关中国成语的信息，请你写一份回信，包括如下内容：

1. 简单介绍成语；

2. 学习成语的益处；

3. 分享自己学习成语的感受和体会。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear James，

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are a necessary part of Chinese culture. Benefits of learning them can be listed as follows.

First, with many of Chinese idioms frequently used in our daily life, a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese. Second, they usually possess vivid and deep meanings, making what you try to convey more convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms. Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.

I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，根据要点文章可分三部分写：第一部分先介绍一下中国成语；第二部分讲述学习成语的益处；第三部分自己学习成语的感受和体会。写作过程中要适当运用连词让文章更流畅；并注意运用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章的档次。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了非谓语动词making what you try to convey more convincing.状语从句because they are a necessary part of Chinese culture.定语从句which helps me a lot、appeal to、absorbed in、a good knowledge of、contributes to、not only…but also等词汇及First, Second, As far as I am concerned等连接词。