题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你所在城市的一个咖啡屋开展“以书换咖啡”活动,请你给你的好朋友David写一封邮件,邀请他这周末一起参加。
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1.字数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear David,
How are you these days? I'm writing to tell you something about an activity named Exchange Your Books for Coffee, which is held by a coffee house. I sincerely invite you to go with me. I hope you don't have any plans for this weekend.
In the coffee house, people can take a book which they have read and exchange it for a cup of coffee. This activity is thought highly of by people because they can not only drink delicious coffee, but also share books with others instead of throwing them away.
Would you like to go to the coffee house with me this weekend? If so, please take a book with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1. 邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。在国际交往以及日常的各种社交活动中,这类书信使用广泛。
一般邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规,具有简短、热情的特点,但也很考究。通常适用于一些平常的事情的邀请,而且邀请人同被邀请人之间很熟悉。一般邀请信格式一般分为:
第一,说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图。
第二,写清邀请的时间(年、月、日、钟点)、地点、场合。
第三,具体交代情景:包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。
第四,表示期待朋友的回复。
2. 写作步骤:
第一步,认真审题;第二,谋篇布局;第三,联词成句;第四,锦上添花;第五查漏补缺。
亮点分析:第一段使用一非限制性定语从句,开诚布公地说明写信的意图:I’m writing to tell you something about an activity named Exchange Your Books for Coffee, which is held by a coffee house. I sincerely invite you to go with me.及一个宾语从句:I hope you don’t have any plans for this weekend.
第二段写清要做的事及地点。在这一段中同样使用了一个定语从句In the coffee house, people can take a book which they have read and exchange it for a cup of coffee. 接着用一个被动语态is thought highly of by people及由not only…but also…引导的并列句:because they can not only drink delicious coffee, but also share books with others instead of throwing them away.
最后一段中用一疑问句来期待对方的期待:Would you like to go to the coffee house with me this weekend? If so, please take a book with you。
总之本文写作技巧娴熟,能熟练地运用多种从句,如定语从句,宾语从句及状语从句等,让给文章增添了色彩。还运用了许多固定的搭配。如sincerely invite you to go with,think highly of,not only drink delicious coffee, but also …share books with others instead of throwing them away,would like to go to the coffee house with me等,这些给文章加分不少。
总之,本文既有主动语态又有被动语态,既有单句又有复句,同是还有较多的高级结构,这些技巧让文章生动形象。