题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的朋友王雨在写给你的来信中谈到她由于性格内向,在社交场合不知如何与人寒暄交谈所以深感苦恼。请你用英语写一封 120 词左右的回信。信中需包含以下内容:
1. 表示对朋友的安慰;
2. 告知对方你也曾经有过类似问题并克服了;
3. 就如何解决此问题提出两点建议。
注意:回信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总字数。
参考词汇:introverted personality (内向性格)
Dear Wang Yu,
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【答案】Dear Wang Yu,
It's always a pleasure to hear from you.
You mentioned that you have been troubled by your introverted personality and that you have no clue how to start a conversation with people during social occasions. Well, just relax because I can guarantee you that you are not the only person who is faced with this problem, I've been there too! I was too shy to talk with people before but I tried my best to overcome my shyness and finally I helped myself out. So here I want to offer you some suggestions:
Firstly, you should do a little advance planning, prepare some low-risk openers ready. Secondly, use the AAA model we learned from our textbook so that you can quickly find some common ground with the person you are talking with.
I do hope my suggestions will help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封回信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封回信;你的朋友王雨在写给你的来信中谈到她由于性格内向,在社交场合不知如何与人寒暄交谈,所以深感苦恼,你要在信中表达对他的安慰,告知他你也曾经有过类似问题并克服了,为他提供如何解决此问题的两点建议;时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时,使用第一人称。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:introverted personality (性格内向),social occasion(社交场合),conversation(交谈),overcome(克服)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如宾语从句You mentioned that you have been troubled by your introverted personality and that you have no clue how to start a conversation with people during social occasions.;原因状语从句和定语从句Well, just relax because I can guarantee you that you are not the only person who is faced with this problem, I've been there too!;连词firstly,secondly的运用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。