Question

科技发展给人们带来便利的同时也引发了很多困扰：人际间的沟通困难、生存环境恶化、疾病蔓延…面对这些问题，我们将何去何从？
根据你的体会，结合具体事例，谈谈自己的看法和建议。
词数120左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。
With the fast development of technology, we enjoy its convenience as well as suffer the troubles.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
With the fast development of technology, we enjoy its convenience as well as suffer the troubles which we human beings can never afford to ignore.
As is seen everywhere, people nowadays live a life on the go with a mobile phone which makes them available at any time. However, they may bend over the phone even when they are sitting face to face, lacking in heart-to-heart communication. Meanwhile , the industry brings about more products as well as pollutes air and water. With PM2.5 filling the air, we, especially the young and the old, fall victim to the worsening air. What’s worse, we are faced with more serious food problems which in turn contribute to more deadly diseases like cancers.
As a matter of fact, human beings are to blame for all these problems. If we wish to leave our next generations a still beautiful world, we have to take action from now on. Stop destroying the earth by cutting down trees and turning green land into concrete. Stop pouring waste into rivers and oceans to protect the water source. No longer waste materials and food but save natural resources for our future generations. What’s the most important is to educate the public and carry out the laws firmly. Hope our combined efforts will pay off one day.

解析试题分析：本文是篇议论文, 讨论科技发展给人们带来的利与弊， 根据你的体会，结合具体事例，谈谈自己的看法和建议。写作时需要增加具体事例。短文要用一般现在时。注意主语谓语的一致性。字数要求120词左右。写作时 尽量使用较高级的词汇和句子的连贯衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子，比如As is seen everywhere， on the go，As a matter of fact ，in turn， contribute to are to blame。还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、动词不定式作表语等较复杂的句子等。并注意了句子开头的变化和句子之间的衔接，如：However，Meanwhile， What’s worse等为文章增色不少。