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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday afternoon, I went shopping with my nephew. He is a 8yearold boy with big eyes and black hair. Because his parents was very busy, they had no time to take care him. Therefore, they asked me to look after her over the weekend. We bought some vegetable and fruit in the supermarket. I also bought him a toy, that he loved very much. On our way back home, he offers to help me with the bags. Seeing this lovely and happy boy, and I couldn't help think of my childhood. How unforgettably a time it was!

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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，主要介绍了作者和外甥一起去购物的经历以及作者的感想

１.a→an　考查冠词。8yearold是以元音音素开头，故改为an。

２.was→were　考查主谓一致。主语是复数名词parents，故谓语动词用复数形式。故改为were。

３.care后加of　考查介词。take care of 照料。故加上of。

４.her→him　考查代词。从上文可知此处指代男孩，故把her改为him。

５.vegetable→vegetables　考查名词复数。vegetable是可数名词，故用复数形式。故改为vegetables。

６.that→which　考查关系代词。非限制性定语从句中缺少宾语，指代a toy，that不引导非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。

７.offers→offered　考查动词时态。文章讲述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。故改为offered。

８.去掉and　考查连词。Seeing this lovely and happy boy是非谓语动词短语作状语，不和句子构成并列关系，故去掉and。

９.think→thinking　考查非谓语。can't help doing sth 情不自禁做某事。故改为thinking。

１０.unforgettably→unforgettable　考查形容词。系动词was后面应该用形容词，故把unforgettably改为 unforgettable。