Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名。他的努力和坚持给了你重要的人生启示。请写信向他表示祝贺和感谢。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Congratulations to you on your winning first place in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently. It is no wonder that you have made such great progress in your Chinese study, because you have always been working hard and are never willing to give up.

To be honest, what I admire most is your hard work and determination. It's from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, “No pains, no gains.” Therefore, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have taught me.

Wish you more advance in your study!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份向美国朋友Peter表示祝贺和感谢。写作要点包括：最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他的努力和坚持给了你重要的人生启示。属于提纲类作文，本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。