题目内容
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪
Hi Worried.:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
Yours,
Jamie
Hi Worried:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends,as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
解析试题分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信,根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰,并提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候,要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答。但是光翻译要点肯定不行,还要求考生自己拓展发挥,关键的是在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。也要注意人称,时态语态和常见的语法问题,同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组:a good way of…的好方法, let out 释放,get rid of消除, carry on 继续进行,句式上体现出多变的特点,如:I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 这句话用了宾语从句,The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句, The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 这句话用了不定式做表语和so that引导的结果状语从句, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词First, Second, And third使文章很连贯。
考点:考查提纲类书面表达
和睦的家庭有利于孩子的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息和自身的感受,以How we can build up a harmonious family 为题用英语写一篇短文。
| 主要特征 | 充满温暖、爱心和欢笑; 相互关爱、尊重和理解 |
| 主要益处 | 生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上; 生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐 |
| 父母该 怎么做 | 言行举止上做好表率; 充分尊重、信任孩子; 经常与孩子沟通交流 |
| 你该怎么做 | …… |
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数120左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.
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