就"现代师生关系"这个主题发表你的看法,并包括如下点: 1你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法?为什么? 2你希望你与你老师之间关系怎样?如何才能建立这种关系? 字数:120 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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就"现代师生关系"这个主题发表你的看法,并包括如下点:

1你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法?为什么?

2你希望你与你老师之间关系怎样?如何才能建立这种关系?

字数：120

【答案】

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The relationship between a teacher and a student can be either good or bad, helpful or harmfuh. Either way, the relationship can affect the student for the rest of his life. A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and well mutually understandable. Whereas, a hard relationship can discourage the student from learning and make teaching an unpleasant task.

In order to have a good teacher-student relationship, it is important that the teacher and the student respect each other. The teacher does not have to force the student to learn. In fact, many students will often work hard simply because they respect their teachers and want to please them. The teacher should motivate and encourage the student without forcing him.

He needs patience and understanding. Learning can be fun when the student has the right attitude towards it. As for the student,he must always show the teacher proper respect. He should be eager to learn and willing to work hard. It is also important to listen carefully and pay attention. Otherwise he would not be able to profit fully from his teacher's knowledge and assistance.

In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutually heneficiah The student gains knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当遵循语言表述的经济原则，即用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。由于对英语词汇了解和掌握有限，再加上母语对我们思维的影响，写作中常会出现赘词和冗繁的问题。赘词是指使用了不必要的词语。这些词语只是用来“填空、充数”的，没有增加任何新的意义；冗繁是指对读者来说不十分必要的信息，或句子中重复的词语。赘词和冗繁使句子结构松松垮垮，使文章冗长、拖沓。因此，我们应该在用词上仔细揣摩，准确清晰地表达我们的思想，剔除冗词赘语，使文章言简意赅。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。

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