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【题目】假定英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was young, my mother owned a store, in that she also sold magazines and books. I love to stay in the store, reading everything I found. It failed to help develop my ability to judge a good book, and it helped improve my reading skills. Then my mother began to focus on quality instead quantity. She bought books I wouldn’t find them in her store. Later, as my interest at theater began, I spent most of time read Shakespeare and George Bernard Shaw, to name the few. Anyway, good storytelling opened the window to different worlds I otherwise would have never entered. In additions, when I lived through a difficultly period books became advisers.

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【解析】1. 定语从句中，that作连接词时，前面不能加介词，而which有此用法。故将that改为which。

2. 通读全文可知，本文时态是过去时，故谓语动词都要用过去时。故将love改为loved。

3. “It failed to help develop my ability to judge a good book, and it helped improve my reading skills”此句句意为“它未能帮助我发展判断一本好书的能力，它有助于提高我的阅读技巧。”由句意可知，前后两句表达的句意是转折而不是并列，故将and改为but。

4. instead of属固定搭配，意为“而不是”。故在instead后加of。

5. “She bought books I wouldn’t find them in her store”此句中books后半句是定语从句，修饰books，且它在定语从句中作find的宾语，故将find后的宾语them去掉。

6. 表示“对……方面感兴趣”应当用介词in连接。故将at改为in。

7. spend time (in) doing sth属固定用法，意为“花费时间去做某事”。故将read改为reading。

8. a few属固定搭配，意为“几个”。to name a few意为“举几个例子说说”。故把the改为a。

9. In addition属固定搭配，意为“此外，另外”。故将additions改为addition。

10. “when I lived through a difficultly period books became advisers.”分析句子成分可知，difficultly修饰 period，而由语法知识可知，修饰名词需要用形容词。故将difficultly 改为difficult。