Question

【题目】短文改错

Dear fellow students,

There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.

Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What's more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.

Dear fellow students, it's high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】crowded→crowd

【2】are→is;

【3】waste前加a

【4】去掉to;

【5】many→much

【6】improper→improperly

【7】that→which

【8】pay→paid或pay前加should

【9】Our→We

【10】balance→balanced

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇小作文，作者指出了学校不文明的现象：许多学生聚集到学校小店里买零食，有人甚至在课堂上吃零食，吃完零食又把包装袋到处扔。吃零食是个坏习惯，不仅浪费钱又对健康不利。作者还提倡养成良好的饮食习惯。

【1】crowded →crowd考察动词。crowded为形容词，意思是拥挤的，塞满的，而此处应填动词crowd，意思是聚集，句意：在我们学校有一个很严重的现象就是很多学生聚集到学校商店里买零食，一些学生甚至在课堂上吃零食。故把crowded 改成crowd。

【2】are→is考察be动词。这句话主语是 Eating snacks吃零食，属于单数，所以be动词要用is，句意：吃零食是个坏习惯也浪费钱。故把are改成is。

【3】waste 前加a考察冠词。waste是名词，意思是浪费，废物，要用冠词a来修饰，a waste of money意思是浪费钱。故在waste 前加a。

【4】去掉 addition to 的 to考察介词。in addition to意思是除……之外（还），后跟名词或动名词。in addition作为连词，意思是另外。句意：另外，大多数零食是不健康食物。故把in addition to 的 to 去掉。

【5】many →much考察副词。fat作名词的时候是不可数名词，意思是脂肪，所以用much修饰。句意：因为它们包含太多的脂肪和糖类。故把many 改成much。

【6】improper→improperly考察副词。improper是形容词，意思是不正确的，此处应用副词来修饰动名eating，eating snacks improperly意思是不正确地吃零食。故把improper改成improperly。

【7】that→which考察关系代词。此处是要用which引导非限制性定语从句，只能用which引导。句意：而且，一些学生到处扔包装纸，污染了校园。故把that改成which。

【8】we 后加should 或把pay→paid考察固定搭配。it’s high time that sb. did(should do) sth.固定句型，意思是是做……的时候了。句意：亲爱的同学们，是们该注意这一现象的时候了。故在we 后加should/pay改成paid。

【9】our→we考察人称代词。we high school students指我们高中生，而our high school students指我们的高中生，作者此处表达的是我们作为高中生的意思。故把our改成we。

【10】balance→balanced考察形容词。balance为动词，意思是平衡，balanced为形容词，意思是平衡的，此处要用形容词balanced修饰名词diet，意思是平衡的饮食习惯。故把balance改成balanced。