Question

假如你叫刘云，准备参加学校举行的“我给市长提建议”英语作文大赛。目前，你所在
城市已经基本实现城乡公交一体化。，由此你想到了公交车司机们。请你结合下表提示，
用英语给市长（Mayor）写一封信。

建议	设立“公交司机节”（Bus Drivers’ Day）
背景	l 越来越多的人乘坐公交车出行 l 公交车司机也随之越来越多 l 公交车司机服务大众，工作辛苦……
时间	在每年某月某日庆祝
原因	......

【写作要求】
（1）      只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
（2）      信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入5个句子中。
Dear Mr.Mayor,
I’m writing to you about starting a Bus Drivers’ Day.
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Buses are playing an important role in our daily life. I hope you can spare your time and think about my idea.   Thank you!
Best wishes!                                  Liu Yun

Answer 1

Now more and more people both in cities and in the countryside are traveling by bus, so more and more bus drivers are working for us. They have to work very hard, from morning till night. It’s not easy for them, especially during holidays. To thank them, I think it necessary to have a Bus Drivers’ Day. It will be good if we celebrate it on October 7 every year, because it’s the last day of National Day Golden Week, and people can celebrate it with bus drivers, even the buses.

试题分析：本文本句简单，要点很清楚，表述也不难，考生只需要按照表格的要点进行翻译，本题的关键在于选词，要选择一些较好的词汇来提升文章的层次，如celebrate等。在陈述原因的时候可以做适当的发挥，可以使用恰当的谚语。
点评：因为提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，关键在于要点的表达方法，以及要点不能遗漏。本文要使用不同的句式来表达要点的意思，如被动句，倒装句等让文章充满变化。